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To pour a poem onto page
select a well of ink
try one with mood
or brooding shrewd
perhaps a wistful ilk
Some brands can have a tad of fear
or fourteen heartbeats loud
to use it in
a pulse of sin
and flash from thundercloud
Some others mix in seasonings
and oil to give it pace
or hints of blood
in dirty mud
with perspiration paste
My ink is just a quiet thing
I buy it off the shelf
unaltered, bland
and nothing grand
a simple liquid self
Fugitive Fragments 
Reposted on my blog, then I went reading the comments. One of them spoke to your use of rhyme in an un-silly way. I re-read it, and think I see some of Kipling’s influence.
Gosh! Your interpretation is propitious and very generous. I thank you sincerely for reading and returning such positive feedback.
Beware of bloggers bearing platitudes 😮. Your prose was an entity unto itself. Beginning, middle, and definitive end. With stanzas 1&4; or 2&3 , you could have stopped there. My Kipling reference was to try an instigate further ‘uplifting’ goal. Ol’ Kip would explain the harsh reality, but usually left you on the upswing – something to strive for.
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Not much on writing prose myself (a character flaw, assuredly), but this one’s pretty good. My only critique is that it should have ended with a more uplifting, forward-looking stanza.
Thank you for this additional dissemination – honoured and appreciative.
Made of things that I understand. Like music that comes together and sits well. By far my favourite that you have written. 🙂
You are kind to provide me with this welcome feedback Nozmi – many thanks.
Hello Mike
You are welcome 🙂
Deft, beautiful work. Love this! And thank you so much for visiting my humble abode….I truly appreciate it.
Kind words indeed – thank you very much.
I love this!
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for your lovely words.
I agree with all the comments
and I like it ! your words make me smile…
I like that you buy off the shelf…simple is best…
Take care…You Matter…
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maryrose
How very kind your welcome words are maryrose – be assured that they are greatly appreciated in spite of this delayed acknowledgement.
Penned in purposeful combination power can vibrate off the written page. Even more amazing is how our emotive state permeates the inks core. You’ve captured this.
Wow! I’m humbled by your poetic appreciation; thank you so much and please accept my apologies for this late acknowledgement.
I love it. Thank you so much for writing this
So glad you enjoyed those spilled words Brandi and I apologise for the delay in this acknowledgement.
Absolutely terrific!
Thank you and please accept my apologies for this tardy reply.
No worries.
Well done, Mike. It’s difficult to use rhyme and not sound silly. You have managed to find the appropriate words that not only keep the rhyme but the rhythm too.
You have a good ear for poetry Jane and I value your analysis with thanks.
I tried to find one or two lines I loved more so than the others…but they all fit so perfectly…I could not. I shall simply say….this is masterfully done…sublimely expressed… I stand in admiration of your talent my good sir…
Christina you overwhelm me (not a complaint). This is a welcome and substantial endorsement from a blogger of your caliber. Thank you for a validation that I shall remember.
I am…speechless…and smiling!
This is marvelous — all the more for the unassuming ending.
Thank you Wayfarer for this judicious observation.
I do love the idea of wistful ink… This poem makes me want to improve my handwriting… 😉
Ha! If only wistful was that easy hollyanne (:
I wonder how long it will take handwriting to die out entirely People such as you or I might become sought-after translators of ancient texts circa 1960.
You may try something wistful and soft with a quiet ink..something original
Goodness! A commission to write a poem! First ever! No promises but as soon as I scrub all the ink off my fingers from this last effort I’ll put some thought into it. A lovely compliment n-l and I acknowledge it and thank you.
wonderful and very creative. lovely choice of topic and appreciate the photo chosen too
Thanks n-l, I’m glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for not being afraid of rhyme.
That’s me, Mike The Fearless Poet! Well, maybe not but versatility (yes, intended) is a good quality to keep ones readers from becoming bored. I am glad that you approve and thank you for stopping by.
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Absolutely gorgeous! Mike is a truly fantastic poet. Not to be missed.
I just want to sink into your way with words and never resurface. Beautifully done.
Phoebe the generosity of your appraisal makes the struggle of writing worthwhile. Your kind words encourage and empower. My sincerest thanks xo
Whimsical and brooding, the best of both worlds. And again, with a stupendous final line!
I picked up the processing of final lines for a master – your good self! Thanks again Brett.
Nice lightness of tone here Mike, and a playful dynamic which is well supported by your rhyming scheme.
Your detailed analysis is greatly appreciated Dara and I thank you for casting your critical eye in my direction.
A wonderfully delightful read. 🙂
So glad you enjoyed this little piece, thanks.
There is definitely nothing bland about your ink, Mike. Nor simple. This is a gorgeous poem.
That’s very sweet, thanks so much (:
Everyone has their “thing”and to put in poetry is very creative and wonderfully done.
You have interpreted me exactly as I wished. Thank you for this confirmation and compliment.
Always worth waiting for Mike.
Chris.
Thank you Chris, I appreciate your words as always.
Absolutely awesome!
An alliterative comment is always greeted with glee and these very generous words are much appreciated. Thank you.
To put it simply, your words made me smile.
This reads out loud so well, and simplicity in my experience tends to accompany authenticity.
I also keep it simple, but I have to admit a fetish for the smell of Sumi ink and even have some incense made with it, but when it comes to writing, I’ll make my mark with anything that comes to hand. 😊
What a discerning observation – noted, thank you. As for your fetishes, whatever turns you on I suppose… (;